Friday, September 11, 2009

"Feedback"

I like feedback to my work to be targeted on what I can specifically add or subtract from my work to make it better. I also like to know why adding or subtracting something to my work will make it stronger. I like hearing what I can do to specifically make my paper more powerful to a reader. However, I want to know why (ethos, pathos, logos) making certain changes to my paper will make it a better paper. I want to know the "whys" of correcting my work so that I can learn to do better on my own in the future.

2 comments:

  1. I like it when people give me a specific reason and point to why something needs to be improved too.

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  2. I agree, giving specific points is very helpful! It lets you know exactly what can be improved.

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