Friday, October 30, 2009

literacy

Multiple Literacies in the Composition Classroom

or

“If We Don’t Teach Them to Blog, Who Will?”

 

English is both rest-home and nursery of the liberal arts. Whether a liberal art is fading from the general education (public speaking, applied civics, ethics and philosophy), or nascent (visual rhetoric, podcasting, webdesign), there is space for it at CCCC’s, in experimental First-Year Composition classes, in writing prompts. Sometimes we justify this broad interpretation of our discipline by adding the word “literacy” to the end of the field: studying music and the spoken word becomes “aural literacy” while a study of art and design is “visual literacy.” While this practice may stretch the literal (no pun intended) interpretation of “literacy,” it becomes the link that gives us the right to dabble in the specializations rightfully belonging to experts of both ebbing and flooding disciplines.

              Despite our forays into oration and technology, we still base ourselves in the discipline of writing. Cindy Selfe rightly identifies in her chapter of Writing New Media that writing teachers are highly “invested” in alphabetic literacy (72). Yes, we are. We have invested in literacy through hours and hours of training and specialization and experimentation. We have become invested financially through paying a lot of money for advanced degrees in composition and writing, and joining professional organizations. We are also invested in alphabetic literacy through our academic practice in writing articles, book reviews, marginalia, and peer responses.  We have become writing teachers in part because of some personal conviction that the written word matters and in part because our education has honed our capacities to identify methods and patterns of effective written communication. It is natural that we would feel comfortable coming back to teaching written text; this is what our job description and course description asks of us.

              So if we are trained practitioners and pedagogues in word-literacy, what are we doing teaching outside of our specializations? Surely no one expects the biology faculty to stray into economics, or the business school to delve into natal development, so why is it “natural” for FYC instructors to wander so far afield of teaching writing?

One explanation may be in how FYC classes are situated: these classes are aimed at first-year students, and often these students are in their first semester at the institution. In this situation, FYC continues on the work started in first-year orientation week. We show them how to use to use the library and online databases; we expose them to research and writing resources across campus; we introduce them to practices of study groups, peer review, and, in many cases, orient them to the higher standards in collegiate work. In this setting, we are general education’s general education the way chauvinists used to refer to a “man’s man.” If our colleagues in Biology 100 and Economics 110 expect their students to know how to navigate the general facilities (library, academic counseling, writing center, etc.) and expectations of our institution, it’s because FYC has provided that general information.

Another reason why FYC picks up so many other disciplines could be that these too-old or too-new fields lack the institutional clout that “composition” enjoys. While no administrator, parent, or member of the board of trustees would object to a GE course on “composition,” requiring students to take a class just on visual rhetoric or civics may seem a wasteful drain on institutional resources as well as families’ meager college funds. These fringe fields are unlikely to receive the funds and support to become a GE. Without the administrative imperative to require a specialized class in these types of literacy, composition teachers (almost eagerly, without objection or call of exploitation) embrace all orphaned liberal arts into our discipline.

I don’t think we are jealous pedagogues. I think that we really do love the written word, in all its forms, more than InDesign, more than the categorical imperative, more, even, than the image. But we think that these types of “literacies” are important for our students. Some of what we teach is going to be applicable in combination with other fields. It’s true: our students are going to have to apply the stases to podcasts; they’re going to have to understand the kairotic moments of brochures; they need to apply principles of introduction and organization to the online communication in which they participate. However, these examples don’t require that we teach technology or design in FYC any more than our (ever great) hope that our students are applying principles of written composition to their other classes requires that we become specialists in nursing, theater, gender studies, or engineering. If we could rest in our cubicles over stacks of persuasive essays with the complete assurance that somewhere on campus there were diligent, well-trained, and well-educated instructors giving our students the background they need in ethics, visual design, civic responsibility, video production and every other new and old field we have sought to incorporate, I think that we would sigh a sigh of contentment and go back to evaluating thesis statements.

But, alas, we can’t. Most institutions can’t spare the money for extensive general education requirements. Most students resent every class peripheral to their declared major. Most parents and donors would like to see students graduating in, at most, four year, with plenty of “real world” skills to recommend them to the institution’s high job/graduate school acceptance rates. So while the title on the business card says “composition” or “English,” we must keep teaching all the fields that are either too grey or too green to be granted their own GE course.

 

BYU

And what does this mean to BYU in specific? We’re lucky, at least, in two respects: (1) We have an extensive list of GE requirements which successfully (mostly) frees us of teaching religion, civics, and civilization. The large number of GE’s (including classes in fine arts, oral communication, and technology) also takes off some of the pressure of providing “cultural induction into the academic world. (2) Not only are we blessed with many GE’s in general, but we are lucky to have two required composition courses, while many institutions struggle under the pressure to teach students “everything writing” in only one semester course. We get to check-up on our freshmen writers as they advance in their fields and enroll in our Advanced Writing courses.

Still, with this relative good luck, teaching multi-modal assignments presents a challenge to BYU composition instructors. In deciding what assignments to teach, and how to teach them, instructors must, in a sense, perform triage of other disciplinary knowledge. It may be useful to ask a few questions while designing a multi-modal assignment:

  1. Is this assignment worthwhile?

It’s not fair to create a multi-modal assignment for the sake of having a multi-modal assignment on the syllabus; make certain the assignment fits into the general objectives of the course.

  1. Is this assignment useful for the student’s academic/professional/personal goals?

In Advanced Writing, you can have more direction in answering this question than in a general FYC course. For example, since many students in the Writing for Arts and Humanities Majors course may aspire to be independently-employed wedding photographers, theater actors, and documentary filmmakers, learning to design a self-promoting website portfolio may be more useful than it would be for the business and engineering students in a technical writing class.

  1. Is this assignment likely to be reproduced in GE or major classes?

No need to reinvent the wheel; if you know that the Bio 100 class requires students to participate a poster conference, then you may decide this particular assignment isn’t necessary, or at least that you will be reinforcing, rather than teaching, principles the students may already have. This is especially important for “linked” classes, such as Freshman Academy. If you don’t know what instructors in other fields are requiring in terms of multi-modal assignments, this is important enough that it may warrant sending out a couple of email to other instructors or, if your institution is lucky enough to have one, a Writing Across the Curriculum/Writing In the Disciplines coordinator.

  1. Does this assignment require students to do significant “prep work” with a specific program? Are they any alternatives that can teach the principle without the technical work?
    Do you want to teach students visual design or do you want to teach them Photoshop? If you’re requiring them to educate themselves outside of class to complete an assignment or if you will spend a significant portion of time in class teaching technical navigation of specific program that may or may not change significantly by next year, you may consider finding alternatives that teach the same principles (say, using crayons and paper to design a website, or recording a “podcast” on a cassette tape). If you have to do intensive research and experimentation to manage a certain program, don’t assume that your students will, by benefit of their generation, have it any easier. If you really are intent that you want your students to be familiar a certain program, you might consider scheduling a professional to come into your class or have a “tech night out” to a Photoshop or Quark class. BYU’s Multi-media Lab has classes on specific programs offered at regular intervals, often in the evenings, in both large- and small-group formats. I’m willing to bet that they would be thrilled if you even told them about the specific project that your class seeks to accomplish.

 

In short, there’s no “multi-modal assignment fits all”; each class must create assignments that fulfill the literacy requirements for those students situated in that class, at that institution. Sometimes trying teaching all types of literacies to a class feels a little like turning on the firehose and having everyone line up for a drink. Be thoughtful and considerate of your students, and remember that even if your students don’t learn everything about every mode you find important, there are many resources available to them. Other GE or major classes, roommates, library classes, personal experimentation, workplace training, and a hundred other sources can aid your students to navigate the accumulating literacies for which they, like you, are increasing responsible.


Monday, October 26, 2009

Final Exam

I think most of the bases are covered already. Maybe you could do something like creating a blog and posting in it least 5 times or something.

Final Exam Legacy

My idea is to have an exam that involves the entire class working together to answer questions that are asked by the teacher. If the class can come up with the right answer than everyone gets it right and if the class comes up with a wrong answer then everyone gets it wrong. So basically it's like the an oral exam that is given to everyone at the same time so everyone can work together and everyone gets the same end score.

Sunday, October 25, 2009

Legacy

I don't have any great ideas either... but if i had to chose something i would choose a group presentation of some sort! Presentations are a blast!

Friday, October 23, 2009

Fianl Exam Legacy

Let's see. I think we're supposed to leave some sort of suggestion to be on the final exam election ballot for future semesters. I don't have any awesome suggestions. The only thing I can really come up with is a brochure where the individual doing the brochure gets to pick the product/person/group/business they want to advertise for (not having their choices limited to just some on-campus clubs). Admittedly it's not the best suggestion ever, but hey, its a post fulfilling the assignment.

Friday, October 16, 2009

Hippy Midterm

1. I am feeling pretty comfortable with the class right now. I feel like I have actually learned a lot. I feel like I have improved in my writing skills and the way to analyze papers. I feel like I will be in good shape by the end of the semester.
2. I am working on time management. I feel like I have gotten a lot better at controlling my time and getting assignments done before the very last minute.
3. I want to get a lot better at analyzing papers. I feel like it will help me out a lot throughout my college career. I can see how this is helping me out in my history and geography classes. I want to get better at the MLA format.
4. They can help review my paper and give me some advice which really helps. I have noticed that the more people that read my paper the better that it becomes.
5. She can help me to understand what the assignment is and give me a lot of helpful advice. It has helped a lot to see Ms. Hedengren's point of view and has helped me to understand what the assignment is really asking and how to focus on certain parts in my paper.
6. I am most proud of the increased desire that I have had in learning how to write a better paper. I never really have liked papers mainly because I wasn't that good at writing them. But I am starting to actually enjoy sitting down and writing down my thoughts and organizing them into one paper through many different revisions.

Hippy Midterm

Eric Nielson
1. I feel very comfortable with the class right now. I feel like as long as you stay on top of the assignments, it isn’t a problem to get everything done. I enjoy coming to class because I feel like class actually contributes to the homework. I like when a class can combine the things that we do in class and out of class
2. I am working on the goal of organization. To start this goal I originally started using Google calendar which I really like. I entered all of my syllabi into the calendar, and now I have a very comprehensive view of all the things that I have to do. I am continuing to work on this goal.
3. I really don’t feel like I have an opinion about the content of the rest of the class. I am fine with what has been proposed on the syllabus.
4. My study group has been especially helping me when we have peer reviews. This is really the only thing that I have used my stud group for. It really does help, I feel, to have other people look at your paper. I always feel good about my paper, then someone points out something that would really hurt my grade. I feel like that is something in this class that is very helpful.
5. I feel like Ms. Hedengren s really good at providing good feedback to us. I really think that she has the students best interest in mind. I feel like it is very useful to me to go into her to talk about a paper before it is due. I feel like she is available when I need her which is really nice.
6. I am proud of my opinion editorial. I felt like that paper went really well, and that I really enjoyed writing it. It was hard at times, but I feel like I really understand how to write one, and what to look for when I read one.

Hungry Hungry Hippos... err... Hippy Midterms

-How comfortable are you with the class right now?
Well, to be completely honest, I feel pretty uncomfortable - awkward even (jokes, jokes) I am, however, feeling a strong lack of motivation. That might just be a symptom of the part of the semester that we're in right now. Nonetheless I do feel that we have a lot of stuff going on, and a lot of assignments that are overlapping, etc. My solution? Just don't do it. (obviously, that one's not going so well for me...)

-Which Richard Light goal are you working on? How is it going?
"Mr. Hilton does not wish to comment on this matter at this time. Next Question please. Yes, you in the back."

-What do you want to work on for the rest of the semester?
Getting stuff done, on time, without feeling ridiculously overwhelmed. (This is a freshman english class for heaven's sake. Why is this more stressful that my major-related classes combined?)

-What can your study group do to help you?
Other than do my work for me? Well... maybe motivate me? Organize group study times? I dunno...

-What can Ms. Hedengren do to help you?
Show me some love. Focus assignments and class discussions on the most important things - those that will help us most with the major class objectives. I feel like things are spread out sometimes, and I don't really know how some parts relate to the whole. I'm probably just a whiner though, and don't want as many assignments. I know I tend to balk at anything that feels like busywork to me. ('Balk' as in... 'not do it')

-What are you most proud of this semester?
English-related? weeeelll.... I think I've done a pretty spectacular job of pulling things together at the last minute - not that I think leaving things til the last minute is the greatest of ideas (cuz it's not).... but seeing as how I've shot myself in the foot pretty often, leaving little to no time right at the end to get things done, I think I've managed to make it happen. Is that bad? probably...
(It's that darned mid-semester apathy thing kicking in again)

Hippy Midterms

I have never really been very comfortable with my writing skills, and I feel as if this class has help tremendously thus far. I am still in the process of building my writing confidence so I would say that my comfort level in this class is at a moderate level.
I have been trying to work on the time management Richard Light goal, and that hasn't been working out so well with all the problems I have run into this semester. The goal talks about how extracurriculars should not interfere with academic performance, and is about balancing my life. I definitely need to work more on this goal, and I have the motivation and energy now to do so.
For the rest of the semester I would like to work on sentence structure and just putting style into my writing. These small writing assignments help because I am then able to practice my writing voice in short and sweet paragraphs.
In regards to study groups, I think it is very helpful to have peer review sessions. I am usually embarrassed about my writing, so this forces me to show it to others and accept constructive criticism, so that I can improve.
The conferences we have with Ms.Hedengren are insanely helpful. In past classes I have not been able to have my papers looked over by a teacher and have not been give constructive criticism. It has helped me very much.
I am most proud of my improvement I have accrued this semester in my writing skills. I have not been as confident as I have now about my writing. I still have a long ways to go, but I feel as if this is a great start.

Jared's Midterm Questions

I am uber comfortable with this class. While it brings about due stress for writing and for these major assignments which I've never been fully comfortable, I am very pleased with the laid-back attitude and leniency I receive during the writing process.

The Richard Light Goal I'm working on is the one involving study groups. My initial mindset is that I can only get things done if I am alone in a well-lit room with no distractions. However, this is probably not the case, as I have so far found that bouncing off ideas off my colleagues relieves stress and often opens my eyes to new ideas.

I would like to continue doing papers and improving the flow and comprehensiveness of my writing.

My study group can continue to be awesome and help discuss ideas and style of my writing. Also reading other people's works helps me to understand what good style and flow can look like.

Ms. Hedengren can help by giving out these cool handouts and guidelines. The yellow paper on RA assignment really helped me come to a better understanding of what I needed to do and therefore helped me on my paper.

I am most proud of being able to write papers more comfortably.

Austin Jacobs Hippy Midterm

1. I am becoming much more comfortable in this class. I once thought that English was not my forte. Now I am beginning to think that although I may not be as naturally adept at English, I can still be very proficient in this class by exerting a little extra hard work. By asking the teacher, my mother, my sister, and the writing lab for help, I can write excellent papers (or at least good papers :D)

2. I was working on getting to bed on time and waking up on time. I haven't missed a class yet due to sleeping in. I have been getting at least eight hours of sleep a night and have been fairly consistent in my sleep patterns. I think I have been doing excellent in achieving my goal.

3. I want to work on getting some sort of A in this class, whether I can fufill my dream of getting an A or come close with an A-, I would be very happy with either result. I would only be happy with an A- or lower if I knew I had done my very best on every assignment in this class. So far I have worked harder in this class than I have in any English class up to this point. In fact, I would say i've worked 400% harder in this class than any other English class and 150% harder than I thought was possible.

4. My study group can help me by being there for me. I have already had to contact their emails to ask about a couple of due dates and assignments I wasn't sure about. They were extremely helpful peer drafting my paper. I think it is also helpful having them there as peers. They are going through the same stuff I am and its nice to be able to talk about what is giving them a hard time and what is giving me a hard time in this class. Our group is so diverse in talent that each one of us has something to offer the others.

5. Ms. Hendengren has already helped me on both of my papers. She has been very friendly and courteous as I have talked about the weaknesses of my writing; she has also been very efficient in the critiques she gives my paper. I know that I am learning from what she is teaching. The most helpful times I've probably had in this English class have probably been talking one on one with her about what I can do to make my papers better. It is good to learn how to write better, but sometimes it is hard to see exactly what you are doing wrong. It has been so nice to see specific things that I do over and over again so that I can eliminate them from my writing style. I have learned more in this English class about writing than I ever did in High School. Most of it has been hard hard work, but if I hadn't been able to seek help while I was working, I may have worked hard at implementing previous bad writing habits. Ms. Hendengren can keep doing what she is doing to help me.

6. I am most proud of the fact that I am working so hard on my papers. I had over eight drafts of my Rhetorical Analysis paper. I rewrote that thing like ten times or more! I am way proud that I am not content for a C in any class, even a class that I was initially so uncomfortable in. I am working hard to get the very best grade I can in English.

Isaac Wilson Happy Midterms

1. I feel about as comfortable in this class as I do in any of my others. It is definitely one of my more time consuming classes, but I have learned a lot, so I enjoy it. One thing I really like is the small class atmosphere. It allows me to get to know both my teacher and peers better.

2. My Richard Light goal was to learn how to use my time wisely. I think that I have done a pretty good job of adapting to managing my time as a college freshman. The hardest part though is getting to bed early. A lot of my friends are always staying up way late doing pretty much nothing, so one thing I have learned is that sometimes it is better to get sleep then hang out with your friends.

3. I would like to work on improving my writing, and with the issue paper coming up, learning how to better research in the Library. I'm sure that learning that skill will be very useful as I progress here at BYU. I already feel that many of the writing tools I have learned in this class will be useful in my other classes. but that one should be especially useful.

4. We can get together more often when we are writing papers so that we can peer edit each others work. I think I can utilize that better.

5. Continue to edit my papers when we have them. I thought that having conferences with Ms. Hedengren for our first opinion editorial was very helpful. Nothing is more useful then having the person grading your paper tell you what you can do better.

6. I took 5th place in the BYU Ping-Pong Tourney. Very proud...

Hippy Midterms

1) I am not very comfortable with this class right now. It's a feeling that is almost as uncomfortable as meeting parents and family on a first date who are constantly drilling you about your life goals and what you are doing to reach them, along with a thorough question and answer board on what your motives are with their daughter/sister. Well I may be exaggerating, but I feel somewhat this way because I did not do as well as I thought I would have on our last writing assignment.
2) I would like to plan out the process of putting my paper together better. I would like to allow myself more time to write and review multiple rough drafts before the deadline and not just limit it to one or two revisions.
3) I want to become better at putting my thoughts into an organized, clear format. I feel that if i was to explain my argument (for a paper) verbally to a friend or someone else, i would be able to do so convincingly and effectively. I feel that somewhere along the way, the powerfulness and awesomeness of my argument is weakened when transitioning from thought to paper.
4) My study group could help soften the teacher's heart before grading my essays. Jk, but really. Actually, they could continue to provide helpful insights to my papers and attack the weak points like they have done so well at before. I feel this help me re-vamp my paper the way that it should be presented.
5) I feel that Ms. Hedengren is perfect. I am not sure that she could do any better, other than provide me with a greater amount of the amazing feedback that she already gives in my rough drafts. I once saw a peer's rough draft that was completely disassembled and critiqued. I was jealous.
6) I am most proud of being able to broaden my mind in the sense of looking at different arguments through different perspectives. I feel that this has helped me develop a stronger mind.

Colby Clark Hippie Midterms

I am fairly comfortable with this class right now-- my source of discomfort being the Issues Paper that is coming up. I am definitely not looking forward to all of the time I will have to spend researching a topic to write this particular paper, and then actually writing the paper. Sure researching can be interesting, but it most definitely is not the choice form of entertainment for me. For my Richard Light goal, I am working on seeking more advisement from professors when I have questions, or need help with assignments. So far it is going well, I'm pretty sure that thus far in my college career I've talked to more professors outside of class hours than I talked to any of my high school teachers outside of class. Also, in some of my larger classes instead of going to the professors I have gone to the T.A.s to obtain help when I need it, and for the most part they have been able to provide it. Preferably I'd like to 'not work' for the rest of the semester; however as this isn't very likely to happen I suppose working on becoming more acquainted with the library here at BYU would be OK. My study group can help me by being there to look over, edit, and give me feedback on my writing when I need it. So far they've been pretty good at doing just that, which is absolutely great. Ms. Hedengren can help me by being more lenient when grading my papers :) Also, she can continue to help by giving comments and suggestions when individuals come in and meet with her during office hours. My greatest accomplishment this semester is probably staying alive; let's just say that the college work load is a little heavier than my senior-year-in-high-school workload was.

Sara's Hippie Midterm

1. I am very comfortable with class now. At first it was hard to get into the assignments and get going on the papers but now I feel like I can easily start writing the papers that are assigned and I better understand what is expected of me in this class.
2. The Richard Light goal that I chose to focus on was time managment. I feel like I am doing a lot better with my goal. Instead of waiting till the last minute to do things like paper I start them ahead of time and this causes me to be less stressed out. There are still things I could be doing to impove upon this goal but I think overall I am doing a whole lot better.
3. I think I still want to work on my time management skills for the rest of the sememster because I can still do a lot better with that.
4. I think that as a study group we could remind each other to be getting our assignments and paper done sooner rather and helping out in any other way possible
5. I think that Ms. Hedengren could just remind us of due dates and of up coming assignments so we can prepare ourselves in advance for them
6. I think the thing that I am most proud of this semester is all the writing that I have done so far. Also, the amout of time and effort that I have put into the papers that we have had to write.

Sean McClellan is a Hippy-Midterms

The earth mother spirit courses through me this day. Today is the middle of the term, a day for reflection and a day for vision. I can see the future. A future filled with perfect grammar and stellar punctuation. In contrast, I look to the past. I remember the days when "The Man" called writer's block was trying to hold me down. But I broke free. My words flow freely and easily like a river cascading down a majestic waterfall. It's all peace. I'm at peace. Sure there will be ups and downs, but i will fight the power. Procrastination is still trying to darken my day. But as long as I remember Richard Light, and how he paved the way, I can overcome. I also need to learn to work with my brothers and sisters in my study group. If we band together with a common goal, nothing can break us apart. My mentor Ms. Hedengren has been much help. Her insights are a total trip into my mind, i'm like "Wow!" I'll keep asking her to help me not get tangled in words, which so often trip me up. Her suggestions will help me stay focused so i may enjoy the writing spirit to it's full extent. I'm proud of the progress I've made. I feel much more in tune with the nature of writing, but I know I can tap into even more power if I just free my writing chakra. As i said earlier, the earth mother spirit courses through me this day. It is my goal by the end of this semester to let it out through writing. Peace be the journey,

Sean McClellan

Kendra Williams Hippy Midterms

1. I am very comfortable with this class. I feel like i really understand what is going on most of the time and i enjoy the things that we are doing in class. The thing that i like most is how comfortable i am asking my classmates for help and how easy it is to talk to everyone. We have a very unified class. I really enjoyed the opinion editorial, and the rhetorical analysis was not too bad!
2. I am woring on organization. It is still working very well. I make a to do list everyday and cross things out as i go. This has been very effective and i have yet to forget to do an assignment or other task that i needed to do for that day.
3. For the rest of the semester i just want to focus on learning more and more about writing and rhetoric, and learn to become a good editer. I want to continue to stay organized and i think the hardest thing for me is staying focused. As the semester goes on i need to stay focused and motivated!
4. My study group can simply be there for me. =) It is nice to know that you always have someone there to call and ask questions if you don't understand something. They can be willing to help and answer my questions.
5. Ms. Hedengren can make sure that we know what each assignment is that is on the syllabus. There has been a few times that i look at the syllabus and i don't really know what i am supposed to do. I call my study group and often they do not know what to do either. But for the most part, she is doing a great job! I really like her enthusiam that she shows in class. She is very good at lifting our spirits and making us feel good about our writing as well as helping us make it better.
6. I would say the thing that i am most proud of this semester is my opinion editorial. I was able to use my voice and style to really interact with my audience. I thouroughly enjoyed writing the paper and am proud of the grade that i got on it!!!! =)

Hippy Midterms

1. I feel pretty comfortable in class. I am pretty confident that I know what is going on most of the time. Occasionally I feel a little confused and am not quite sure what is expected though. I usually get back on track fairly soon though.
2. I am working on being more organized. I don't write in my planner as much as I used to, but I am still writing in it. I have been more organized this school year, than I ever have before, so that's a good thing I guess. I still have a long way to go though.
3. I want to continue being organized, but also work on not procrastinating. I tend to leave the big assignments for the last minute. Doing it this way just gives me unwanted stress and doesn't help the overall quality of my work at all. So for the next half of the semester, I will work on doing everything early. That way I'll be way less stressed and hopefully my work will improve.
4. My study group can help me whenever I'm feeling like I don't quite understand what is going on in class or when I don't understand how to do an assignment. They are a good resource to turn to for help. They can also help me to complete assignments that might be difficult to do alone or that would just be easier in a group.
5. Ms. Hedengren can help me by making sure we know what is expected of us for the next class time. It is sometimes hard to know what to expect for the next class. So going over what's due at the end of each class would be really helpful.
6. I am proud of my improvements. I think that I've become better at editing and revising and that's a good skill to have.

Chandler Newby Hippy Midterms

Answer the following questions:
-How comfortable are you with the class right now?
I'm getting to be a bit more comfortable with this class. I've never really liked English, as I'm sure you know by now. I know that it's important though, so I do my best in class.


-Which Richard Light goal are you working on? How is it going?
I'm working on the goal of getting things done on time. I always procrastinate my assignments, and I end up pulling all nighters the day before things are due. I did a little better with the opinion editorial, but then I crashed again on the rhetorical analysis. Hopefully with the issues paper I'll be able to get most of it done before the day it's due.


-What do you want to work on for the rest of the semester?
Getting things done! I want to just get this last big paper done and over with. I'm proud of these last two papers, but this issues paper will be the biggest thing I've ever written. I also want to work on organizing my time a little better.


-What can your study group do to help you?
If my study group started doing peer review more often, even just small little read throughs, I think it would help. If I need to get a draft done so that I can send it off to be reviewed, then I won't be able to procrastinate as much.


-What can Ms. Hedengren do to help you?
I think just continue doing what you're doing.
I'll have questions a lot, especially when we're doing a big paper. Coming to class, they usually get answered. Somehow, I'm not sure how, you just know what I'm struggling with and teach it in class.


-What are you most proud of this semester?
The fact that I've written two papers already! And big ones too. I wouldn't have done anything like this in high school.
I took Business Communications my senior year, and did one paper the entire year. It was 3 pages long, and we had the first 4 months to do it. This class has definitely given me more work than I'm used to.


Word Count: Min 300
Response: (Check, especially, your study group's responses) Min 2
Time: 15 min
Title: (Your Name) Hippy Midterms

Bryn Bateman Hippy Midterms

1. I'm pretty comfortable with this class right now. I have a confession I took english 150 last year.... (yeah i'm a sophomore) and pretty much stopped going. I hate english - how can someone hate english? I do, I struggle a lot with it, but I think having it be my second year of college it's just better. If I just keep coming and keep doing the work then it's not too overwhelming.
2. I'm working on time management. It's going, but definitely has room for improvement. There is a lot of managing I need to still do and I think if I actually did it, my stress level would go way down and I wouldn't be physically sick all the time.... haha.
3. For the rest of the semester I want to work on reading! I love to read books. I hate to write, but I love to read and I know we won't read fiction the rest of the semester but I would enjoy that if we did.
4. Just keeping me updated. Sometimes I feel like I have no idea what's going on and what's due and when and they're always good to shoot a text to or phone call so that's nice.
5. Remind remind remind! Just keep repeating what's going on in the class. It helps so much. I know it's my responsibility to look at the syllabus and blackboard, and I do but there are still times when things come up and I had no idea what was going on. Just lay out the schedule everyday and it would be awesome!
6. I'm proud I'm still in the class! I know it sounds lame, but I haven't given up yet and I'm still truckin' and I've written two papers and they're turned in and I couldn't be prouder:)

Midterm

The class does have a fast pace but I am fairly comfortable with it. I like the pace because it forces me to stay focused. It challenges me to create habits that can produce high quality papers in a short period of time.
Currently I am working on not procrastinating in completing revisions and editing my assignments. I find the emphasis on peer reviewing in this class to be very helpful. The next half of semester I am planning on using my study group more by requesting more peer reviews.
My study group can help me by continuing to peer review my assignments. The extra set of eyes greatly helps in revising papers. During a week that a paper is being written, it would be helpful to meet outside of class as peers to discuss the assignment.
Ms. Hedengren can help me by having more clarity when introducing small assignments such as the Rhetorical Reading Analysis Worksheet. This will help me use my time more efficiently. I like the lessons on developing my own writing style in any genre. More lessons like these would be beneficial.
The opinionated editorial. It was the first assignment of this genre that I have written and it was very successful. I was nervous that my topic did not have enough of a serious nature to be considered an editorial. However with many different peer reviews and revisions, I was able to develop the proper tone to create an effective editorial.